Glamour ey? Would she be fae by any chance?

At any rate, it was an interesting read! I much preferred the first part of it when things were happening in real time though, being shown to us instead of told. I thought some of the memories in the second half were fun but were told really fast and crushed together. I think it'd be brilliant if you could have them as decent flash backs throughout the book rather than condensing them all into a couple of paragraphs in the opening chapter. Peoples' attention might wander otherwise with info overload. I hope that's of help. Lemme know when the book comes out 'cause I'd totally read it.